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Comparing Olds with a modern poetry, music, I chose two artists. Olds is somewhat two sided for me. She has her darker, reality side; the side that conjures up horrific images about politics, family abuse and even bodily functions. This side is comparable to Maynard Keenan, seen on the modern comparable II page. The other side of Olds is her romantic, forgiving, loving, soft, grace giving side. This side is also very honest and at times explicate, but it has a more positive, optimistic aura about it. I compare this side of Olds to Damien Rice.

Damien Rice is comparable to Olds in his romantic, yet at times explicate lyrics. Damien's lyrics have a raw honesty about them as do Olds poems. I have chosen to compare Volcano by Rice with Olds Sex Without Love. Both are speaking about a deep level of intimacy with another but come to a point of it not being the sole point/plot of the poem or situation. Olds Sex Without Love talks about the act of making love and the mindset or judgment of one who could have sex without the love being present. But then brings the poem to the point that with or without love you are a sole being, alone. Damien's Volcano speaks of a love that is not equal between two people and/or a love that is felt, is not the true nature of the feeling. It states not to build your everything on the love that you hold to be true, for it may break you down. 

 

 

Sex Without Love

 

How do they do it, the ones who make love

without love?  Beautiful as dancers,

gliding over each other like ice-skaters

over the ice, fingers hooked

inside each other's bodies, faces

red as steak, wine, wet as the

children at birth whose mothers are going to

give them away.  How do they come to the

come to the  come to the  God  come to the

still waters, and not love

the one who came there with them, heat

rising slowly as steam off their joined

skin?  I guess they are the true religious,

the purists, the pros, the ones who will not

accept a false Messiah, love the

priest instead of the God.  They do not

mistake the partner for their own pleasure,

they are like great runners: they know they are alone

with the road surface, the cold, the wind,

the fit of their shoes, their overall cardio-

vascular health- just factors, like the other

in the bed, and not the truth, which is

the single body alone in the universe

against its own best time.

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Volcano

Don't hold yourself like that you'll hurt your knees
I kissed your mouth and back that's all I need
don't build your world around volcanoes melt you down
what I am to you is not real
what I am to you you do not need
what I am to you is not what you mean to me
you give me miles and miles of mountains
and I’ll ask for the sea
don't throw yourself like that in front of me
I kissed your mouth your back is that all you need?
don't drag my love around volcanoes melt me down
what I am to you is not real
what I am to you you do not need
what I am to you is not what you mean to me
you give me miles and miles of mountains
and I’ll ask for the sea
what I give to you is just what I’m going through
this is nothing new no no just another phase of finding
what I really need is what makes me bleed
and like a new disease she's still too young to treat
volcanoes melt me down
she's still too young
I kissed your mouth
you do not need me