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Maynard Keenan is the lead singer of the band Tool and A Perfect Circle. Keenan's lyrics are very harsh and honest to human nature at its ugliest. Olds has been criticized for these very facts. The two are also comparable by their choice of topics. Both speak explicitly about relationships, abuse and politics. One of A Perfect Circle CD's, eMOTIVe, is solely about war. Both Keenan and Olds have very strong, explicate lyrics/poems about our political system. I have chosen to compare a song from both of Keenan’s projects. For A Perfect Circle, Counting Bodies Like Sheep to the Rhythm of the War Drums is about our system keeping us in the dark. Blinding us to the reality of what is going on so that we choose to not take action, to stay comfortable in our ignorance. I have compared this to Olds Ideographs poem. It is comparable simply by the fact that we choose to do nothing. Ideographs is more explicate and gives us knowledge of these horrific acts, while at the end pleading for help. Counting Bodies is seen from the perspective of not allowing ourselves to see the horrific acts and yet still sending people out into the very act we are trying to blind ourselves from.

Ideographs
( a photograph of China, 1905)
 
The small scaffolds, boards in the form of
ideographs, the size of a person,
lean against a steep wall of
dressed stone. One is the simple
shape of a man. The man on it
is asleep, his arms nailed to the wood.
No timber is wasted; his fingertips
curl in at the very end of the plank
as a child's hands open in sleep.
The other man is awake- he looks
directly at us. He is fixed to a more
complex scaffold, a diagonal cross- piece
pointing one arm up, one down,
and his legs are bent, the spikes through his ankles
holding them up off the ground,
his knees cocked, the folds of his robe flowing
sideways as if he were suspended in the air
in flight, his naked leg bared.
They are awaiting execution, tilted against the wall
as you'd prop up a tool until you need it.
They'll be shouldered up over the crowd and
carried through the screaming. The sleeper will awake.
The twisted one will fly above faces, his
garment rippling.
Here there is still the backstage quiet,
the dark at the bottom of the wall, the props
leaning in teh grainy half-dusk.
He looks at us in the silence. He says
Save me, there is still time.

Counting Bodies Like Sheep to the Rhythm of the War Drums
 
Don't fret precious, I'm here.
Step away from the window, go back to sleep.
Safe from pain and truth and choice and other poison devils.
See, they don't give a fuck about you like I do.
Count the bodies like sheep.
Counting bodies like sheep to the rhythm of the war drums.
 
ow, ow, ow, ow, ow, ow, ow, ow, ow
Go back to sleep.
 
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason.
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices, son.
They're one in the same.
I must isolate you.
Isolate and save you from yourself.
Sleep.
Sleep.
Sleep.

 
 
  "Cold And Ugly"

Underneath her skin and jewelry,
hidden in her words and eyes
is a wall that's cold and ugly
and she's scared as hell.
Trembling at the thought of feeling.
Wide awake and keeping distance.
Nothing seems to penetrate her.
She's scared as hell.

I am frightened to.

Wide awake
and keeping distance from my soul.
I am scared like you.

                            Tool

                    

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